A date at McDonald’s
A date
Daniel asks Laura if she would like to meet him at McDonald’s tomorrow at 7 pm. Laura gets really happy and says ”yes!”. She has always liked him a bit. Daniel comes home and Ben is alredy home. Ben notices that daniel comes home later than he normaly does and asks him what he is up to. Daniel smiles and say ”i have a date with Laura tomarrow”. Ben looks at him and is about to say something when Daniel starts to talk uncontrollaby.”it’s tomaarrow at 7 pm at McDonald’s and did i say who I’m meeting i’s Laura... you know from our class”. After a while Daniel needs to breath and that is when he ses that Ben looks crazy...and he says ”You have a crazy idea don’t you?”.Ben looks at him and says ”We should play a trick on her”.”It’s probably not gonna work but it’s seem fun lets do it!”.
At McDonald’s
Ben and Daniel walk to McDonald’s they are in the shadows all the way just for safety. when they arive Laura isn’t there so Daniel hides and Ben walks in to the aura of light that comes out of McDonald’s so that Laura can se him from a distance. At exacly 7 pm he ses a person walking towards McDonald’s and him... it’s Laura. They walk inside because it’s winter and almost night. when they look up at the menu she notices this 1 inch scar going across his forehead and then she remembers Ben accident. She starts asking him about Daniel and her previus conversation. Ben knows nothing of the history of there conversation so he is doomed. She looks at him and screams ”You stupid idiot you faked the whole thing”She storms out of there. Daniel heard the whole thing,they heard her i China, when she comes out she ses Daniel and gets suprised but Daniel explains everything and she thinks it’s kind of funny when she thinks about it.So in the end Daniel goes on his date with Laura.
The End
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